Lennon Was Wrong |
This song came out of my first year of marriage, which contained, among other things, a child, being broke, and cancer. We're much better now, but not for lack of fighting for it.
art of music at its best.... ok homemade... but it's the vibe that counts
I appreciate your words. thanks a lot
there is someone outside who knows what I mean....... ddv
I appreciate your words. thanks a lot
there is someone outside who knows what I mean....... ddv
This is class stuff! I'm well into your song, love the guitar playing and seriously enjoyed the play within the lyrics.
You are a poet and a song writer.
Even though I liked the chorus harmonies and in my self feel that I follow the 'meaning' of 'love you more' as compared to Lenons Loov, I still think the chorus is a bit too much , the verses are so soft and so very subtle but the chorus is a massive outburst of crashing harmonies resonating from every corner of the room.
Sounds to me like you could build the harmonies up slowly , making it sound like your "working at it"!
Never the less I've downloaded it, thank you.
I must check out your other stuff now!
You are a poet and a song writer.
Even though I liked the chorus harmonies and in my self feel that I follow the 'meaning' of 'love you more' as compared to Lenons Loov, I still think the chorus is a bit too much , the verses are so soft and so very subtle but the chorus is a massive outburst of crashing harmonies resonating from every corner of the room.
Sounds to me like you could build the harmonies up slowly , making it sound like your "working at it"!
Never the less I've downloaded it, thank you.
I must check out your other stuff now!
This is really great stuff. I too think that you're lyrics are brilliant. The whole song is very emotional and powerful. Yes, there are a few nitty gritty issues with the recording... for me, its mainly the levels of the vox, but this is seriously good. well done
Ian
Ian
Thanks for the input |
I'll post a modified version in the next few days. I actually increased the vocal strength simply because I got bored with the original version after going over it repeatedly. The original is softer...lessons learned on how not to overwork something, I suppose.
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