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ends very suddenly doesn't it? I think you could do with some percussion in your tracks, otherwise very nice composition.

Ian

I really like this one, the guitar work is perfect and the melodies are pleasing to listen to. Only thing I'd change is the volume on the bass, tone it down just a tad.

does this work??????as i  hear
1riff.............2louder with bass............1riff........2louder again
chops/bass finish and very abrupt at that
no its 'work in progress'.........
doesnt add up to a completed anything yet
sorry......good recording quality ........but .......no vote..........yet

hey get some vocals in here???..........or something to lift wot is a backing trak!!!