I'm uploading this song again but this time with a rough melody on it. I've added another guitar to the chorus and tweaked some other bits, hope u like it

Nice lead. Looks like this is coming together pretty well. Keep up the good work

Sounds good. Reminds me so much of Last Dance With Mary Jane that I thought it was until the chorus. The whole thing sounds pretty good there are just some timing issues throughout, particularly at times when a second guitar comes in or out. The drumming's alright but it gets a bit boring after awhile. This is a nice song and a great progression and lead but there's a lot of potential here if you fix it up. Tweak the timings and consider a more interesting and maybe more subdued drum line and add some bass. Good start.

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After listening to this again, I really like it again.
Its just really cool and awesome. Throbbing with feeling. You do the lead really nicely too.

Sounds happy ! Something hard to hear in these days.

The stereo is too much for me. I think it should be reduced a bit. Maybe with some kind of reverb or a tiny delay. I have difficulty to get what is being said because of being to seperate..

Liked the part starting at 2:05 !

its pretty good but the tempo is too slow

Nice sounds from the guitars.
Like the overall feel
A couple of really nice lead runs.
Agree about the tempo being too slow
Some timing issue with the recording - a bit of tweaking needed to get it all on the beat (latency problems?)
Cymbals (on my left) are a bit too loud in the mix.

That said... still pretty good stuff

I have to say I really like the groove  on this one.  I can definitely feel the song, and have a number of ideas for a really good drum beat.  I think it needs a bit more planning though.  There is definitely a good structure for the song.  I would go over it about 20 more times until there is a specific part for each section, everything until the end sounds a bit improvised.  And maybe put a sustained chord at the end...that would be nice, a perfect finish.
overall it sounds like you have some great ideas, I would work on some of the timing issues to really get everything coming together really tight, but I like the general tempo, if you want to get it to feel a bit edgier I would increase the tempo by about 5 BPM, don't go much more than that, otherwise you'll lose the groove.
Are you using the guitar lead in place of a vocal melody?  maybe it's just me, but it sounds like it could use a little bit of development in the progression.
overall a great start, lots of good ideas to build from!