#1August 21st, 2008 · 02:01 AM
9 threads / 8 songs
24 posts
United States of America
Old School Feel
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This song is not in a battle


This one I'm kind of iffy on myself...it starts out ok but i think i changed a little too much when the chorus comes around...it's got an old school feel to it..hence the name...but you guys tell me what i can do with the chorus to make this thing blow up

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#2August 21st, 2008 · 03:28 AM
373 posts
China
Nice lead so far... gets a bit long over the thirty second mark tho'.... yeah, takes a minute to get into a change... a nice little change up there, comes a little too late, unless this piece is meant to be accompanied by lyrics... catchy little groove... not too shabby
#3August 22nd, 2008 · 04:14 PM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
Worth waiting for the development that comes in at the minute mark.  But boy you kill it with the repetitive riff for me.  Needs vocals over it to provide the listener with a little aural break.
Love it when the other stuff is there.... more of that needed for sure.
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