What you hear is what you get. Maybe I'll do something with this.

only problem i see is the lows on your guitar are a little too high and your highs arent high enough....or is it that your lows are so high it drowns out the highs?....i don't know but other than that it sounds good

And I think you could make this into a very nice sounding piece too - but it needs some development in terms of additional instrumentation (percussion, strings maybe, and vocals if possible).
But I like the theme, and enjoyed the playing.

Ok soal, I'll work on adjusting the pick-ups on my acoustic. :/ lol thanks though.


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I wrote lyrics and fruitylooped a drum track but I have trouble singing so its disheartening when I try. I dunno, what I was thinking when I wrote it was hammer up the scale over four strings separately, and pull off down the scale in three stringers simultaneously.

Its hard to hear the E pull to the Eb when I am pulling Db-Bb-A as I am pulling Eb, E, Db with my other fingers... Too much noise, boys. Too much noise.

This is one of the best works I heard from you..Honestly this is quite good...Love to hear this in a final production..Nice chord movements!Very well done!

Very Nicely done mrD, like the roundish style progression and playing is happening , echoing Jim , the canvas is wide open as in where you would like to take this ,
maybe some light perc pepped around , vox or instrument meandering around

Obviously its better to get a clean recording straight up , but digitally cleaning up is available , just get in there with the pencil .
terrific!

Absolutely beautiful piece... gorgeous melody, hauntingly so... I like it the way it is... adding vocals and other instrumentation or a cleaner mix would only make this piece that much better!
What a great mood... solid guitar play!


Hen Hao!

hahaha well i wasnt sure if you were using straight acoustic or running an electric acoustic through an amp...i meant the lows and highs on the amp hahaha...lol my bad