This is an instrumental piece created by my band. It's created by using synthesizers, and a lust for mellowness. Enjoy =)

This is ok as far as it goes.  For me it never really develops though, with a repetitive loop and a few nice touches to spice it up.
I think it needs to be a fair bit longer, and go in another direction (harder, weirder, more melodic - not sure which direction, just that it needs to shift a little).  The mood is mellow though, so that's good stuff.

This is pretty good. I agree that it should be longer and you could give it a bit of variation aswell, like coming back in at 1.22 with a slightly more complex beat and some different melody lines.

good work... look forward to hearing more

Ian

it's gud but i feel like the songs trying to lead me somewhere and we never get there.

Nt bad at all but needs a bit more to it to make it into a song maybe another section...but nt a bd start

getting there

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just needs a bit more development

the fish

Likd the small "beep" at the end of each loop.
A little bit monotone for me. More variations please 

Reminds me of nine-inch-nails! Very trippy. Should be longer! Good sh*t.!

I would try to develop it a bit more, think about the overall composition and where you want the song to go.  How does it lead the listener from one section to the next? I don't work very much with electronica or techno, but I would like to experiment more with it.  Maybe on my next album.
please continue work on this idea! it could be really cool with some more development!