Preliminary recording. Should I redo this with some quality? Help me out.

not bad for home recording..  I really like the song though.. you should work this a little more then do a real kick ass recording .. maybe a short pro studio block. would probably  come out amazingly good.

yeah,develop it further.it's a good start,good song,dude!

It's a good song and the guitar sounds great, but everything seems all muffed up. Like, there doesn't seem to be any depth in the song, it sounds like someone put a small pillow over the guitar part.

By the way, the vocals were good, especially when you threw in the harmony at 1:58 (I think) and 2:48. 

The song was great, just need to kind of amp it up on the volume side.

Hope you'll come out with the finished product!

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Yep.................
It sounds like 2 mikes and live??????
If so its very good!!!!!!!

needs to go through a desk and multitrack if possible.............
liven up the sound ..........eq.....
It all sounds a bit in the middle tone wise,,,,,,,,,,
but a very good song .......well done

I vote

The Fish

Guitar out of tune a bit to my ear - recording quality also a bit like a (good sounding) quick take to ensure the song's saved somewhere so that it can be later developed.

So as to your question: the answer from me is "yes, definitely".

I liked the song a lot, and think there's a fair bit of potential there.  I'd double up on the guitars, and have them much cleaner - ensure the timing's spot on - add more layered vocals with harmonies in a couple of extra places - and perhaps add percussion of some sort (dare I suggest bongos even!).

It's a good sounding song.

Good song,

As others have said, It lacks depth, you would make it sound so much better if you got better acoustics with the guitar and yourself.  Keep it up.