#1August 12th, 2008 · 12:52 PM
151 threads / 150 songs
265 posts
United States of America
My Way or the Highway

This song is not in a battle

I pulled up an old abandoned song that I wrote and redid it. I soon discovered why I had abandoned it in the first place. The chord structure is quite odd and is way out of my range, so I left it instrumental.

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#2August 12th, 2008 · 10:27 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,540 posts
This reminds me to The Seeker and also Nirvana. Nice mixture!
Pretty good production and mixing, but it really needs vocals on it.
Hope you make some voice arrangements here.
Good job.

          > Iszil
#3August 17th, 2008 · 04:13 PM
54 threads / 29 songs
1,552 posts
United Kingdom
Oh yes, vocals needed on this one - it sounds like a backing track without them. 
I like the overall sound, the instrumental choice, and the general construction.  Think I'd be tempted to brighten the drums a little, and bring them forward in the mix.
But good work.
#4August 17th, 2008 · 10:59 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Great track...Well it still sounds good with out voice but yea some vocals would add tons..Good work though!
#5August 18th, 2008 · 06:12 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
5 posts

Not a bad backing track, do you have lyrics for it? Because you should post them and I'm sure a few of us could help you get the right notes for the lyrics.  All in all good so far, it'd be sweet as if you got the right person for the vocals.
#6August 20th, 2008 · 02:22 AM
14 threads / 14 songs
232 posts
United States of America
Are those mutes lefthanded or right handed? They seem almost like distorted true clicks you get when you mute lefthanded but also seem to have some melody in in in in in them, I dunno.

I like the bridge solo area around 2 and after. Puts me in the mood for some fret board assassination. Time to wake the neighbors gentlemen. Later!

#7August 20th, 2008 · 01:16 PM
9 threads / 8 songs
24 posts
United States of America
wow i see where iszil is coming from...it does remind me of Nirvana...and who doesn't love Nirvana?
#8August 20th, 2008 · 10:43 PM
373 posts
Yep, decent little pop rock tune, waiting for some vox... catchy and clean like your others.... good show...

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