I pulled up an old abandoned song that I wrote and redid it. I soon discovered why I had abandoned it in the first place. The chord structure is quite odd and is way out of my range, so I left it instrumental.

This reminds me to The Seeker and also Nirvana. Nice mixture!
Pretty good production and mixing, but it really needs vocals on it.
Hope you make some voice arrangements here.
Good job.

          > Iszil

Oh yes, vocals needed on this one - it sounds like a backing track without them. 
I like the overall sound, the instrumental choice, and the general construction.  Think I'd be tempted to brighten the drums a little, and bring them forward in the mix.
But good work.

Great track...Well it still sounds good with out voice but yea some vocals would add tons..Good work though!

Dude,

Not a bad backing track, do you have lyrics for it? Because you should post them and I'm sure a few of us could help you get the right notes for the lyrics.  All in all good so far, it'd be sweet as if you got the right person for the vocals.

Are those mutes lefthanded or right handed? They seem almost like distorted true clicks you get when you mute lefthanded but also seem to have some melody in in in in in them, I dunno.

I like the bridge solo area around 2 and after. Puts me in the mood for some fret board assassination. Time to wake the neighbors gentlemen. Later!


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wow i see where iszil is coming from...it does remind me of Nirvana...and who doesn't love Nirvana?

Yep, decent little pop rock tune, waiting for some vox... catchy and clean like your others.... good show...





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