beautiful song buddy, although i didn't think the distorted guitar solo part worked with it. great singing, i think you should add a few more ups and downs in the vocals though. try changing the tune slightly. all in all it was good though

i like the song a lot because of the fact that it's dark, but the song isn't just a modern screamo band wailing something about how life sucks.  besides, the music isn't really heavy sounding, which is perfect for this song.

it's got meaning, and it's real life.  maybe not for everybody, but definitely for lot of us on a few different levels!

Writing and making songs is a great way to express yourself when your down and I bet when you listened to the good work you produced you felt loads better! Keep it up. It's the best song i've heard on here!                                             

Dear Mike, i really like this song, is very touching. keep it up!
ciao

I was so impressed with this I downloaded it and mastered it in Wavelab - its a great song. Hook me up on MSN punkrulez@hotmail.com and I'll show you!

Excellent production, man!  Loved the vocals, lyrics, pretty much everything.  Guitar solo was fitting, excellent and beautiful, and unlike dcspoonman I think bringing the piano part in afterwards was perfect!  Genius legato finish on the piano.

Wow, that is incredible. those are great lyrics and the piano is great. You guys did an awesome job, i really like this.

Oh my god! Why didn't you win the battle you were in?
How come you only came 10th??
This is a absolutly beautiful song, Im going to download it, put it on my next CD and have it on repeat for ever...
 

what a fantastic song.  maybe the piano is a little loud - its a great line but it dominates the melody.

Beautiful song. Sad yes, but meaningful, we all need a sad song sometimes.
I'd like more variation in your singing, stretching the melody a little. The voice is very good though.

This is a real shivers-down-your-spine song. Incredible.

honestly one of the best songs i've heard in a while. perfect... right down to the piano part.

pure genius