#1July 29th, 2008 · 09:34 PM
15 threads / 15 songs
47 posts
United States of America
My First Step
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This song is not in a battle


This is my oldest and first song I ever wrote on a guitar. For years I played this tune without any words to it. So about 4 years ago I finaly did. I decided to make the lyrics about how it was my first song and a way going back to how it all began. I've done a version of it before but I enjoy this version more. hope you do too!

This is the first song I wrote on my guitar.
The notes simple.
And yet complicated.
My hands were trembling.
My head was buzzing.

It was so long ago.
Surprised how I still know.
How the notes go.
And how it made me shown.

Through the power of music I tasted my soul.

This is the first song I wrote on my guitar.
The notes simple.
And yet complicated.
My hands were trembling.
My head was buzzing.

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#2July 29th, 2008 · 10:15 PM
128 threads / 44 songs
2,814 posts
Puerto Rico
Man good job..I like the vocal layers a lot..Should get rid of the hiss..I'll let the song cut out cleaner..Anyways good listen!
#3July 29th, 2008 · 10:51 PM
6 threads / 6 songs
47 posts
United States of America
This is a  very soothing and hypnotic song, man. Very good!
Your harmonizing sounds really cool too.
Put some more stuff up let us hear it!
#4July 29th, 2008 · 10:56 PM
1 threads / 1 songs
15 posts
United States of America
Fantastic, your style is relaxing and uplifting with an emotional quality that is just out of the real of proper description.
Cant wait to hear more!

p.s Good to see you made it
#5July 30th, 2008 · 11:20 AM
5 threads / 5 songs
590 posts
United Kingdom
great intro, love the harmonising vocals. I was expecting a little more definition to the lyrics, because if they weren't there in front of me, then I wouldn't be able to tell what you were singing. Other than that, great ethereal stuff.

Ian
#6July 30th, 2008 · 09:14 PM
17 threads / 16 songs
99 posts
United States of America
I like the layers and harmonizing! dude I can hear some bada** drumming to this but I would never be able to play what I hear in my head. I would back off a little on the vocal effect and bring forward the singing. You have a good voice don't hide it so much. Regardless I liked it the way it is.

Damn this is you first song ever wrote!? wow I'm not going to post my first because it sucks so bad.
#7July 30th, 2008 · 09:45 PM
373 posts
China
Hauntingly beautiful.... Reminds my a bit of Dead Can Dance or This Mortal Coil....
You waited four years to add vocals but in my opinion the vocals are what seals the deal here...
Absolutely loving the feel here...

Oh, I can't download this.... too bad... would like to put it in my collection.... any chance of that?


Hen Hao!
#8November 1st, 2008 · 10:36 AM
77 threads / 45 songs
2,296 posts
United States of America
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Cool..nice style here. I love the fact that you made a song about your first song...I also like how you repeated your lyrics from verse 1 to last verse with this particular song a nice touch for some reason I think...

Flyer

Nice rating
#9November 1st, 2008 · 04:45 PM
6 threads / 5 songs
29 posts
Denmark
Hey
Really Nice Friend ! I must learn your techniques someday
#10November 3rd, 2008 · 06:33 AM
77 threads / 59 songs
923 posts
Netherlands
beautifull

was hoping for a 'powering up' part, but its nice as it is
mix a bit soft though?
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