Playing with 9th chords and feedback. A good idea turned into utter cheeze.

Lyrics:

You never gave us a chance to be
I'm watching face here on the screen
Looking at  every part of you
I don't know if that's right or not
Holding on to my facebook girlfriend
Stealing faces of you

I am a cretin on a screen
Now I know exactly they mean
When they say you can go
When they say you can go crazy
When they say it can make
When they say it can make you creepy

You never knew me well enough
I never knew your name
We always talked about that stuff
But never dived in deep
You say that you need me
You say it alot
You say you can feel me
But I think not



I always wanted to have more
Wanted to hold your hand
I never had the courage at all
To see the truth inside
We kidding ourselves
Forgetting the real world
But you gotta realize something
Its only pixels there

Got a catchy riff there. Has good flow but any chance you can bring up the other guitar parts? There so samll in the background.