How about some classic-rock flair? I like this  one.

Lyrics:
VERSE 1
Here's the thing
About this girl
She's like no other
In the world
She took piece of my heart
And chewed it up
And spit it out
I crumbled down and fell apart
And then it all
had a start
She had her
Control of me
I was her puppet
She pulled the strings

CHORUS
And she had all of me
and she had all of me
and she had all of me
and she had all of me

VERSE 2
She wants to know
Everything
That I'm doing
Lying
She's got eyes
Everywhere
in her friends
This I swear
She's got this way
With what she says
She's hypnotic
I'm a mess
She's lonely
She's crazy
She  takes it out on me
its amazing.

CHORUS

VERSE3
She pulls the strings
On my bones
Makes me walk
Makes me talk
She tugs the wire
On my heart
Makes it beat
Tears it apart
She stares me
In the eye
I'm stuttering
I think I'll die
She's always
Angry
I'm ashamed
I don't know why

CHORUS

INSTRUMENTAL

OUTRO/ VERSE 4
Bickering
Bantering
Making up
Always
Yeah here's the thing
about this girl
She's like no other
In the world

lol this reminds me of that song 1985 i think it is....dont ask me why because i have NO idea....it just does

those lyrics sound a bit codependent..poor guy hope thats not you...anyways good song ,good arrangement..If I had a girl like that, I would kick on the butt and send her too... well not going to say where but anyways good song...!

Classic rock?  Arrangements sound well balanced but this style's not really my bag... Good mix, tho'....