another one from nessa.  i added the bass line just a rough line but an idea i had

good singing.  keep developing the bass line - it sounds good, but could be more.  Nice quiet song - very relaxing.

I like this, it's a nice laid-back feel. The vocals sound great, and the instruments fit perfectly with the mood. I might be mistaken, but it sounds like there's a reverb added, which sounds really good with it and gives it sort of a live feel.
Sounds good.

yeah im not sure what she added when she recored the vocals and guitar. she just emailed me the mp3, im using my yamaha freeless through a  M audio black box into garage band. acu 360 preset on the black box and warm studio bass preset on garage band

That was an absolute pleasure, like a cool breeze !
Good job both of you.
Very relaxing, very laid back, very nice sound.

I liked it. The vocals were a perfect match for the style.Listening at work so I couldn't here the bass lines sorry no feed back there.

Outstanding!  Great sound, beautiful vibe!  Love the vox!


Hen Hao!

Like the sound and feeling of this one.  The vocals are fab - delivered with tons of emotion.  Some issues with the vocal recording though (too much for the mic, clear distortion heard in places).

Would perhaps develop the song just a little more to have an instrumental (or otherwise!) bridge - this could be a strummed guitar section, and would simply break the repetitive sound of the (very nicely played) acoustic.

But this is a good bit of work.

Very sweet    Yes, great vocals, no doubt!   Instrumentation gives the perfect environment for the voice expression. I love it.

A bridge?   That would be good, yes. Maybe whistling or some "doo-doooo... doo..." following the melody with the voice.

Great work!  Rated!