#1July 19th, 2008 · 07:09 PM
14 threads / 9 songs
90 posts
United States of America
Teh Raging River v.1
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This song is not in a battle


This is a collab project that my friend and I have been working on. We're looking for any tips and advice for the final version. =)

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#2July 21st, 2008 · 11:37 PM
17 threads / 16 songs
99 posts
United States of America
It's a great song. The piano could come down just a little in the beginning.
#3July 22nd, 2008 · 06:53 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
12 posts
Israel
It starts and ends very abruptly.  Maybe think about adding a bit of an intro/ending section.  I'm not sure the bass part at the beginning really goes well with the melody - try listening to the bass line by itself, and then again just bass and melody (no drums or other synth) and see if that's really what you want.

Anyway, it sounds like you've put some decent work into it so far.
#4August 1st, 2008 · 06:01 AM
373 posts
China
better drum programming I think would save this a bit more... a decent concept, but I think some good drums and breaks would liven this up to what I imagine it's suppose to be like.... nice job...
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