You ever been down? Way down?

       

Down where...????
I hear a miau of a cat at .11 and .36??
LOl
Anyways cool song...Nice guitar playing...The recording is a bit far but when you increase your volume I saw why...Maybe a story to the lyric would grab me a bit more ...Anyways good potential!

Reminds me of rusty cage by sound garden. Nice guitar playing. I here the cat too lol
If you could get a closer recording it might sound a little better. As Marino said it has potential.

the cat was in heat and pretty vocal for a while. she was saying "out!" she wanted to go out and have a second litter. one was too many. yeah the song is pretty lame. i guess its more of a general statement of being than a piece of music. things will get better for me and the music in time. thanks for the posts. i'm gonna whip up a blues instumental right now though

If you're not a street musician, you might want to consider it. For the tips, ya know. That's what this sound makes me think of.

Ok, so not a professional recording here. No technical work really. But basic is ok too.

Seemed a bit long for me, without changing. You might want to consider adding some verses, or something like that.

The song has potential. Way down? Could be way up if you try.

It's not bad. I like the sound of the guitar, and the overall tone of the song but it would be fantastic and a lot more memorable if you had some more lyrics and such.

i hear ya, its a work in progress

Why dont you sing "going forwards" ?..... it might get it somewhere !

 

lol as you are singing waayyy dowwn...i keep thinking LAAAYLLAAAA lol lol lol. man lol.
reminds me of layla by eric clapton for some reason...lol...LAAAYYLAAA
man i cant stop laughing,
this is really nice, I cant wait to hear more of your work