this could have been 30 seconds long and it would ahve ahd the same effect, cool sounding but ultimately goes nowhere...

You're obviously a talented musician, and you're doing some pretty different things. I think as you experiment more, you'll develop a really awesome and powerful sound. Just keep playing around with stuff, and don't be afraid to mix it up.

Really good, i like the guitars, very hard rock but the drums are so flat.
But really really good, check OvO alergy too!!!