Hi everyone.  It's been a long time since my last upload but I'm hoping to add more soon.

For anyone that is interested, this song is a response to this news article -

http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/world/asia-pacific/7419969.stm

One of the most incredible blunders I have ever heard of.  I added a bit of a fictional story element to it too.

Constructive feedback would be appreciated.

PRG

Wow thats pretty cool man..The mix is not bad..nice separation on the mix and a nice voice performance...The mix in general I do find a bit mellow but it makes it for more chilled vibe..Anyways great layout...Yes that sucks for the officer....(LOL)but it is funny!

Cool ending solo!!

Thanks

I don't know why but my mixes generally seem to turn out quite mellow.  It may be to do with the fact I generally feel more creative quite late at night so my vocals are generally recorded late.  I live in a flat with neighbours on each side so I have to record any vocals really quietly. 

I think I'll go and write a death metal track now, that'll sort out my mellow problem!

Nice job. Everything is timed well, and the mix is pretty decent. If it were my mix, I'd fade the vocals a bit more into the mix, and bring the rhythm guitar up a bit more, so all the elements blend more equally.
I like your middle section with the harmonization and the voiceover, nice & creative.
-Transfixed

its taken me week to get to this one .....sorry.......

STORY SONG!!! now thats different    

You first shot on PROTOOLS.................

its a cool song but the mix ix a bit repressed and hollow ........
guitar sceams too much


john

This has a nice mellow feel. The vocals are a little in front of the music. I think Transfixed's advice would help this track out. But it's still awesome. Can't wait to here more!