this wasn't actually meant to turn out how it did, it just went its own crazy way.
i have lyrics to this so watch this space.

Good arrangement!

I don't think this has much improvement to add to it, because everything seems well put together. I think your choice of drums is pretty neat, considering the fact that it's an uncommon sound that you would hear in everyday music.

Did I mention the mix was great? Yeah, thought I did.

This reminds me of the car commercial you see on TV these days... The ones advertising the new hybrids and stuff... The songs from there usually sound fresh and clean like this.

The end also has a good fadeout. I haven't heard many songs end with that anymore.

Nice to hear some kiddie tunes again. 

        --XFactor--

lovin this!!!! 

gd job

Manizzle

I like how you can't tell it's twinkle twinkle until about half-way through.  It does have a soundtrack quality to it....it makes me want to drive.  I'm curious about the lyrics - but more so about the melody you'll use for them.  It would be cool if you used a melody different than (but harmonious to) the twinkle twinkle bit.

I'm liking it! 

Whooooooooooooooooo "you have lyrics to this"
Get them on PD.

xx

Funny (in a good way)

I felt the start was like being at a funfair.  Nice mix.

Liked it.  I'll be interested to hear it with lyrics.

PRG

Well seems there's two people associating this tune with cars. I don't... I hate cars! But I like the tune... What's kiddie tunes got to do with cars anyway? ... I might throw up.. because of that possible relation..

Hmm nice job, what else to expect from ye olde pd?? vocals maybe?   muahaha ! Hope you are well! I'm watching your space!

Awwwwww.... I was expecting a vocal to come in somewhere...  You've got a great voice for something like this.  So glad to see you are still at it.  This is a heartwarming tune here...  I could see it in a happy family scene in a movie somewhere.  Its also got a tinge of depth to it that could be easy missed towards the end if you arent careful.  You could actually develop that end piece into something more if ya liked...  very nice.

reminds me of the Sims music.
Just a bit more effort on the mixing, and it will sound amazing.
Good job!