Again a rough demo of the song. After having listened to it a bit I'm thinking I need to bring it up a key. It's pretty straight forward whats it's about i guess.

Very nice feel..Love the snare work..Very smooth...The recording overall is quite tasteful...The voice sounds a bit dry but in general is a quite warm take which works for me..Nice harmonies and some real good arrangements!
Excellent work!

Nice introduction to your music, solid song arrangement love the brushes well recorded vox warm and dry with presence  ,key wise getting  great feel from the range you  singing in and the harmonies tops , very tasty looking forward 2 more
greetins from Australia
blakhatz

You are the man! We definitely need to get together and get er' done!!!

Absolutely must agree, a very tasteful tune and pleasant song.
If I have any comment at all it is that I'd love to hear the vocal 'play around' more, because it is such a singable song......more harmonies and conviction to 'stay with her forever more' and this is a hit!

Its light years away from that what you've done so far... To me it's an amazing step leading into the right musical direction. A gorgeous song and a shaky rhythm catches the listener to hear it until end... and it lets you keep the chorus in mind... Beautiful....

just listening for the third time

Great stuff! You are the man!!! I love your harmonies dude! Can't wait to jam again!

nice song, but when I hear your voice it sounds as though it belongs in a punk band. Like Green Day. Maybe if the guitar turned to distortion and power chords after the first verse it would be a little tighter. Nice drums btw.

awesome work.  i agree with kings, id like to hear a bit more playful vocals, but man! this is great stuff