Superheroes Don't Exist Demo

Hope you guys like this. I hope I'm getting better at songwriting.

Please don't judge on production e.g. the use of instruments that aren't real and the fact that I recorded my vocals just now at 2.30 in the morning while I have a cold . I just wanted to get a demo version up before I go on holiday on sunday and we're out tomorrow. I'll have a bit of time to work on this while I'm away so all comments between now and saturday evening are especially welcomed!

Thanks for listening!

Pete

this has some really good potential, man.  i'm only listening on laptop speakers, but it sounds like you can record your voice pretty well!  good job.  I'm trying to hear it in my head all big and produced and with guitars and stuff.  This would make a great acoustic song, actually... I'd like to hear it produced as both acoustic and electric (I assume electric is what you have in mind)

i like the way that it changes and progresses, and the end is good too.  i'm kind of excited to hear this go onward into something amazing!

again, solid idea! talk to you later!
tim