nice comment, and thanx 4 people who apreciate good rock, though this was not what we could call a Song

good song. love the solos. i agree with the person who said u should make some singable songs. keep it up.

i will sing smth, just w8, it's a pretty song i will do

i love the tone you get with the guitar, and the solos are very good (although it might help you out to plan what you wanna do for a solo instead of improvising completely). the intro is weak, but understandable, if you actually got real instruments to play the parts, this would be a great track. kinda reminds me a little of godspeed you black emperor or the arcade fire. rock on man

Really liked it. Your very talented, I honestly wish I could play like that too

this will be soon some part of a rel song, cuz it only an improvisation: i will make a real structure song with this and then show it again

you're a pretty decent guitarist dude, your tone isnt particularly to my taste but ure technique is awesome, i also like the way u experimented with a heavyish solo over a not so heavy backing, you fancy doing any kinda collaboration work? PM me if your interested thanx.

Tu habilidad para los solos es muy buena...Solo trata de mantener la limpieza en los fraseos (muy buenas escalas por cierto tambien)...Se que a veces tenemos que "empujarnos" a tocar mas rapido, pero tenemos que darle hasta donde nuestras manos lo permitan o el buen trabajo musical se perderá.

De resto, muy buen performance...

la cago!!! ta weno el tema! .... terrible dreamtheater....
bakan loko.... te paseai en la guitarra

Listened to all of your songs.  By the time you are my age you'll be a better songwriter, bass, guitar player and a singer than I ever was.  Keep it up--you have talent.  Regards.

I really liked the chord progression of the piano... It really added to the momentum buildup of the guitar entry.  Style-wise, it's not my cup of tea - but that's my fault, not yours.  I agree that it would sound quite powerful with authentic instrumentation.  Nice licks, by the way.  I liked how you stayed out of the upper register, going there only for emphasis on a run.  That's an instinctive skill that is often overlooked, in my opinion.

I like the solo's (Especially the squeals) Love the ending very cool indeed.

Good stuff man....Keep plugging away. It's pretty hard to have lyrics but they're not always needed. Look at Steve Vai. Keep it up and move in as many different styles and directions as possible.  That would be my only advice. Thanks. Keep it up...

Just new to the site, like the song, hope to hear some lyrics soon

did you write that on your computer?