First new original song in a while. Happy with everything except the vocals, as usual.


Meaningless lyrics:

VERSE 1
I don’t have to be perfect
But I wouldn’t feel bad
If I was more special
Than I think I ever had
I don’t have to be wise
But I’d like to be smart
Oh I don’t need to be rich
But that would be a start
And I’d wish you’d just tell me
Where I should go from here
What to eat
And what to wear
And then I would be closer
To the statue in the hall
Oh then I’d have something
I’d have it all

VERSE 2
Oh I don’t  need to have talent
If  I’ve got a band
I don’t need to keep plans
If I make them out of sand
Oh it makes me feel important
When someone feels small
I push all my problems
On everyone and all

BRIDGE
I’m flawed
I’m chipped and sullied clay
I have to say

CHORUS
I don’t want it
To have to be this way
I don’t want it
To ruin your nice day
I don’t need it
But I couldn’t do without
I don’t feel it
But you know I feel your doubt

I don’t want it
I don’t want it


I’m flawed
I’m chipped and sullied clay

Oh I thought I had problems
But I see in a better light
When you know you’re crazy
You’re not really nuts, right?
Oh I don’t have to be special
But I need to play the part
Oh I don’t need to be perfect
But that would be start

You have as I said before some awesome skills in your song writing abilities.Voice is not bad,just a bit more work on it and it should be fine..the mix I'm not sure about theres some buried vocal parts and and some ares with mush frequencies!!!anyways good show!

I love the lyrics..  the  overall song is good.. just production stuff..  some levels are off when the dist. guitar kicks in.. buried  vox.  could use some eq help. but still very good.

starts off good, kicks in nice... need to let go on those vox... feels like your holding back a bit...
nice overall mix and good feel...

Hai Ke Yi!