#1May 17th, 2008 · 04:02 PM
90 threads / 73 songs
263 posts
United Kingdom
Acoustic Song 4
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This song is not in a battle


Good name eh?

lol.

This is a song I want to work on with TLS so we'll see where it goes.

I'm really looking for ideas to develop it from here.

Thanks

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#2May 17th, 2008 · 05:34 PM
7 threads / 4 songs
32 posts
Netherlands
I think the appriogos are to thin to use when you using just one instrument. Also the chords in the constrasted section/second section is to thin. You could take a second guitar playing chord under the apreggios and visa versa and/or have a drum to make it thicker. It sound very flat in all. If you want to develop it from here i suggest you think out a form, like ABABCAA or something and fill it up. That's up to you. I would defenatly thicken the piece up, but that's just me.
#3May 30th, 2008 · 05:50 PM
11 posts
United States of America
Pretty good. Maybe you should change the lyrics a little bit? It could also end with that acoustic part you played for the intro except in a higher octave.
#4May 30th, 2008 · 06:21 PM
160 threads / 15 songs
2,310 posts
United Kingdom
re: Acoustic Song 4
strong lyrics..........
rubber band backing........
octave 2 low .................. why
??
fish
#5May 31st, 2008 · 07:29 AM
373 posts
China
Reminds me of Lou Barlow's sound.... Sometimes works, sometimes doesn't....
Waiting to see what you guys come up with...
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