I sit on the rainbow
with my stash in one hand.
And in the other
a dove so beautiful.
I touch the wind with my hair.

I know the wind don't blow here.

What did you see?
What did you hear?
What did you smell?
I wasn't there.

I sit on a giant flower
waving to myself.
And on my shoulder
a dove white as snow.
I touch the wind with my toe.

I know the wind don't blow.
I know the wind don't blow here.

What did you see?
What did you hear?
What did you smell?
I wasn't there.


I am telling you no lies,
I guess that is a big surprise,
but I would never want you to know.
The tears that's falling from your eyes
tells me that you can see my lies,
but I will just pretend that I don't know.

So, I've made up my mind.
I don't care what you saw,
I don't care what you think, no!

I am telling you no lies,
I guess that is a big surprise,
but I would never want you to know.
The tears that's falling from your eyes
tells me that you can see my lies,
but I will just pretend that I don't know.

I am telling you no lies,
I guess that is a big surprise,
but I would never want you to know.
The tears that's falling from your eyes
tells me that you can see my lies,
but I will just pretend that I don't know.

Wow, this one is amazing. I can be quit a critic, but this is amazing all the way. The voice melodies are great, the contrast are good, the composisiion is good, the instrumantation is good, the lyrics are good. You should never stop writing, realy. I have one thing to suggest: When your voice "cries", like in surtain places( like with the word stash in the first verse), be sure you keep it in harmony. It falls below the "right" note sometimes and creates a unnecassery dissonance. The first verse and it's variation( I sit on a giant flower etc) are of amazing beauty.

nice........................ very nice
no critic as its your own style
i like
ker sploosh
the fish

Ahh never fail to disappoint poignant melody >>> your your voice and musicality  is maturing Kine .
You write some great songs keep at it .

  

Wow Kine.... your'e on a roll...........and a good one at that....

This is one of your best.

Great songwriting lady.

Keep 'em comin'

Cheers

Denis

Lovely song, really good performance.
I'm getting different Beatle sensations, not only does the guitar have a Norwegian Wood feel to it , the melody in your voice has a wonderfully young familiar originality about it and the very deliberate slow tempo at which you play and sing articulates the whole story so well.
Keep it up 100% 

thanks!

I loved the flute at .37. Very melodic with interesting lyrics. Nice variation throughout. Good work.

EGGY