Little Lullaby I wrote last week
Hope you like it
pm me and tell me what you think it's about

Still

In my dreams I see you walking
Softly spoken you're rarely talking
Nature sings to your gentle spirit
Listen closely you just might hear it

The first time I saw you
They said you were gone
So it's up to me to
Write your life's song

That's why I call you Still

In my vision see you living
Humble spirit with no misgivings
Pure as snow your soul is raised
Now with gold is your city paved

I saw you were blue
laying on that table
You wanted to live
But you weren't able

That's why I call you Still

Really soft, and very soothing. Great job!

Very nice Guitar picking..I wish I could pick like that. Your lyrics are very nice..I like to see the lyrics posted.
I think that your holding back on your vocals....Maybe you could try to get a little deeper in your delivery..I'm not a person who likes to give advice to people because I'm not the greatest critic...But, I think you have a lot of potential...Keep on going...Try to open up more with your vocals...I really like this song..Very nice...

Flyer


Good Rating

Thanks, guys. I appreciate all the critiquing I can get.