#1May 14th, 2008 · 04:55 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
Melody and the Stone v 2
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This song is not in a battle


new version of "Melody and the Stone"!


Part 1, The Calming Stone:

[instrumental]


Part 2, The Runaway:

Little girl, don't cry now
You ran so fast, you lost him
He's not chasing you now, girl
Don't cry, don't cry
But I know he's coming to
find you later, so go find
a good place to hide for your life

Ah........................


Part 3, Melody:

She likes the sun
She hates bad weather
She, she likes to dress in black
She is tired everyday
She thinks everything looks big
She doesn't want to fall asleep
She has a secret place of her own
She likes to rest at the stone

How did you get through those days when everything went wrong?
Why didn't you belong anywhere?
anywhere, anywhere, anywhere

She looks up at the sky
She wish she could fly
She likes to dream the days away
She wants to drift slowly away

How did you get through those days when everything went wrong?
Why didn't you belong anywhere?
anywhere, anywhere, anywhere.........




Part 4, The Calming Stone (Reprise):

"Morning sun sneaks in. I don't want to get up." Oh, no.
The words of a broken girl who only have one thing in her life that keeps her up.
She doesn't like the morning sun, but the sun is one of her favorite things.

The stone, the stone is hers. Only hers.
Ah, when she's restless and tired, the quiet stone is her friend.
She found her peace of mind.

Her dreams become so real, and she never has nightmares
Oh, at the stone.
She wish she'd never wake up. She wish to live a dream.
But that could never happen, she knows that life is mean.

The stone, the stone is hers. Only hers.
Ah, when she's restless and tired, the quiet stone is her friend.

The stone, the stone is hers, hers, oh...
Ah, when she's restless and tired, the quiet stone is her friend.
She finally found her peace of mind.

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#2May 14th, 2008 · 07:34 AM
7 threads / 4 songs
32 posts
Netherlands
Your instrumantation is quit good. The tamborin is nice as a rhytmic instrument standing alone in my opinion. The electric quitar melodies are good. I don't know what that string-like sound is. The doubling of the voices in the beginning wasn't realy to my liking. Are both voices yours? If so, ask somebody with a different sound to double you there, beause two same voices doubled at a different pitch are to homotonic. I think the lyrics, although quit simple in a poetric sense, are quit touching. I did like them. These are all just my opinions, no musical facts. I think you break up the song with the guitar solo nicely. Your use of voice fits the lyrics amazingly. A thing i would have liked was if the last three phrases would have been with tamborin and voice-doubling again. I you use a feature once it has no real musical signifigance. The ending is realy great, the mood you set with the plugins and the tapping are great
In all i realy liked this song. Good job!
#3May 16th, 2008 · 07:50 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
thank you
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