...everythings 99 cents.

The mix could use some work..I have my problems with mixing myself..lol...its not really all that bad ..just need to work on it some...I think your vocals needs to more up front...and the tapping put in to the back a little..all in all though...good work...


Flyer

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i agree, the recordings not the best.

Needs work.....not a lot but defo needs it.

Effort sir

Yeah the recording quality/mix isn't the greatest (did it on a 4 track cassette recorder) and i usually try and go for a lofi kinda sound. With that said any input on the song itself?

I think the drums are a bit to straitforward and repetative. It could use some extended breaks. The rhythem guitar is also to repetative. Fit a bar or two in where the sequence is broken up. This always does wonders to the listenalbility. Also a contrasting section would be to my liking. The piece goes on the same, with hardly any instrumental changes. It could be the mixing but the mood is quit flat, also do to the repetiveness and lack of sections. I know i'm harsh here, keep in mind that this isn't realy my type of music so that my comments wouldn't be to rosery anyways. I hope you will understand i mean to be of help, it'sd ment to be constructive critisimn.

Besides the recording quality, the bang on the offbeat is very distracting from the lyrics and the rest of the song in general... perhaps it would be better at certain interludes in the song.

I like the bass's sliding octives around :40 though

Good Work

i reeeeeeeeeeeeely like th start

ok its a ruf recording.............

but nice ideas........
it works for me
just work on the sound a bit

more please

the fish