This is for my A2 Music Coursework, you like?

Please give this a chance to build up,  there is 60 bar intro that gets louder and louder, but then gets into the main theme...

Nice feel in general ,specially the theme.I also found the theme well orchestrated..The midi sounds are really taking away from the smoothness in both the general composition and arrangement...I'd try replacing those stock midi sounds with maybe some other VST or plugging....Anyways good show !!!

The main theme is great, realy nice. The intro string melody seemed to lack horizontal coherence in a few spots, but that might just be me. I think the form,harmonic and melodic direction are a bit arkward after the main theme. Maybe you could restate the main theme, so that the will be a more obvious form present. It's a nice piece, espacialy the main theme is great!

thanks peeps, i thought it was pretty bad myself...

lol

it's good.

I mixed and did the panning because Dale needed it as an MP3 so I had to change the instruments around a bit from the original.

So the instruments aren't that great.

Hey I hope you get top marks for this interesting composition.

It would be interesting if you could find some quality orchestral VSTi's and pluggins, I assume you are allowed to do that?

The piano seemed too loud in the mix.

Well done

Denis

Yep..Definitely a nice build up..Nice piano work..Is it me or does this have a Silent Movie..Theme to it...Like a love story..where all you see is the actors talking in the movies  but there is no sound..you have to read what is being said on the screen as the words are typed for all to read while watching the movie..it would make a great silent movie soundtrack...lol..or, maybe I'm (TO) old school...hahahah..nice work here


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