Watching an old relationship fall through and a new one made.

Nice feel here, good base to work from, hey I'm sure you can wite some song words about the old and new relationship, can you sing, if not do a BeandAMP collab?

Cheers

Denis

actually i really don't like my vox but I would love for someone to do some for this song, that would be awesome

thats pretty impressive nice one!!

You have good chords on this one. You might want to watch the timing on the solo guitar though, it seems a little shaky at times to me. Drums with brushes would be nice and it would probably make it easier for others to add stuff onto if you're looking for a collaboration.

With some work to refine the timing and get a better mix....this has a lot of poetential..I think this would make a nice country tune...Denis has a good point...See if you can get a collaboration going..

Flyer

Rates

hey thanks, I'll def work on that

the solo is out of sync with the rhyhm.. the guitar bends are way off.. as is the note choice in parts. and the whole thing is begging to be delivered with more authority.
the backing chord are nice though. Keep at it man!

thanks for being honest, its actually about two years old, so my bad, i just had a friend upload it, i'll def be working on some changes.

This was really interesting. I thought it was all excellent. You are doing well.

You've got the right idea... need to make another....