Romance in F |
Again a romance. This time it's in F major. I wrote it a couple months ago. I title a piece a romance if it's ment to be like somthing i would passionaly say to someone i love and it's not yet a relationship. Like a balcony-serenade. To give you an idea where the inspiration comes from.
I hope you enjoy it.
I hope you enjoy it.
A very nicely crafted piece of music, which is indeed full of romance - but it could equally be a sad piece describing the loss of a loved one.
I liked it very much.
You play superbly, and clearly have loads of talent for composition too.
In terms of the recording - this is clear if it's turned up, but I think you need to normalize the music and possibly add some compression to bring out the dynamics of the instrument a little more. But that's simply technical stuff that can be addressed any time - the music is lovely, and played excellently.
I liked it very much.
You play superbly, and clearly have loads of talent for composition too.
In terms of the recording - this is clear if it's turned up, but I think you need to normalize the music and possibly add some compression to bring out the dynamics of the instrument a little more. But that's simply technical stuff that can be addressed any time - the music is lovely, and played excellently.
quite lovely.. theres a volume swell around the 1:15 mark.. but thats just the recording. the playing is full of feeling. good job!
Awesome! |
Great job amigo!
An emotional piece to be sure, but it fails to evolve as a romantic piece would. It sounds like a very withdrawn Phillip Glass piece, and fails to deliver the passion I was expecting at the end.
Don't get me wrong, I could loop this track on my CD player and listen all day, but there is no distinct end. The end is there, but it needs to be more than a couple of beautiful notes, give it a conclusion, so people could imagine a fully developed story, going on in the background.
It was great, but the end was kind of a let down...
An emotional piece to be sure, but it fails to evolve as a romantic piece would. It sounds like a very withdrawn Phillip Glass piece, and fails to deliver the passion I was expecting at the end.
Don't get me wrong, I could loop this track on my CD player and listen all day, but there is no distinct end. The end is there, but it needs to be more than a couple of beautiful notes, give it a conclusion, so people could imagine a fully developed story, going on in the background.
It was great, but the end was kind of a let down...
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