It's very original i must say. I think i had worked as an modern "classical" piece. The voice and drums put me off a bit, but that's my taste. It's quit incomplete as for now i think. You set up a harmonic structure and ended it without resolving or giving direction. I'd say either expand the piece with a constrasting section and/or develop it futher or give more direction to the harmony you already have. Eventhough i have some critics i think it's a orininal, well crafted piece, it's just not finished in my opinion.
re: Lanium |
this is ok...............fish............aaaah you did me after a while..............I still love to not like your stuff. ......musically.
i understand 'music is the organisation of sound'...........i live by that ethos...so this well done ................. but..........if u want to lock into de construction of music genres...this is tame
movie music.........................haha
works well !!!
love
the fish
i understand 'music is the organisation of sound'...........i live by that ethos...so this well done ................. but..........if u want to lock into de construction of music genres...this is tame
movie music.........................haha
works well !!!
love
the fish
odd |
Dude, when I can hear individual tracks it sounds good, but they all mush together and it becomes nothing but noise... I'm usually a fan of electronic music, but this needs to be cleaned up.
Once a composer told me that, "You should never have more than three things happening at once," and I think that statement applies here, three things doesn't mean that you can only have three tracks, it means, maybe only strings, a drumbeat, and voice. Or any three events. You seemed to just throw some tracks together, but this genre, in my experience, is all about presence. How loud or soft something is. Or how fast it is. You get it.
Add more development, and try to give the listener something that stands out that they can focus on.
I may be overreacting, because of my taste, but the track sure sounds muddy during some parts
But, pretty good choice of tracks for the most part
Once a composer told me that, "You should never have more than three things happening at once," and I think that statement applies here, three things doesn't mean that you can only have three tracks, it means, maybe only strings, a drumbeat, and voice. Or any three events. You seemed to just throw some tracks together, but this genre, in my experience, is all about presence. How loud or soft something is. Or how fast it is. You get it.
Add more development, and try to give the listener something that stands out that they can focus on.
I may be overreacting, because of my taste, but the track sure sounds muddy during some parts
But, pretty good choice of tracks for the most part
Not your best work IMHO sounds like a whole bunch of samples stuck together...You usually have quite unique stuff but still retains musical integrity and usually awesome stuff I might add.This one falls a bit short from your other work..The mix is also a bit all over the place compared to you other work...Sounds like you did this for fun and without any musical expectations..
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