This Love.
composed in 2004

.verse1
you are the heaven
every rain drops in my life
healing the portion
of me

.verse2
oh how can i live
without the grace touch of your lips
we gotta be one
i know, i know

.chorus
this love is not just imagination
you are more than glowing inspiration

This has potential to be a great song, your voice is reall good... Unfortunatly, the recording lets it down, i'm thinking it was originally recorded on an analogue 4track onto cassette because there is alot of hiss and white noise to it, get your self some good multitracking software and re post this one (a longer version) and i think i will prob be adding it to my playlist then...

Garbage.  If you're going to try and sound like Justin Timberlake you got to at least record it well!  

Try to record it again and I thinkn it would be great, i think the song has something nice in it!I like the voice!Keep it up!

The song is very nice!your voice is interesting too, just record it in a studio and the effect will be stunning!
ciao.