Here's a little track I made... hope ya'll like it...

Keep at it its coming along fine...I would center the rhythm guitar as oppose to hard panning it so much but yeah,Its cool!!!Good job!

I can hear you made some mistakes at some points. You should work on that a bit, since it can be pretty distracting. Also, some of the notes, especially the bends, sound very out of place. I would also add some hammer ons and pull offs to make it flow a bit better.

The change at 2:32 is...confusing and sounds unnecessary.

So yeah, work on your bends some more and make sure you're hitting each note like B.B. King.

yeah dazednconfused you are right but i find those little flaw charming. Besides that the song has a lot of good ideas so to me the positive aspects are superior. congratulations to this rhytmic piece.

thanks man, I just impovised it, btw. thanks.

Sounds like you had fun bro, got any song words for it??

Cheers

Denis

nope, just in improvision while my band (Crystal Pistol) is working on recording our debute album.

But its too loud man!!