I'm rather unhappy right now. I'm in the middle of testing and I just learned that I was rejected from an internship that I had wanted to get very badly.

So I wrote this thing. It's rather catchy, I think. I was going to add vocals, but its in a difficult key for me.

Sounding really good.......It's amazing what great things come out of feelings of despair, rejection or just being pissed off and fed up...Nirvana, Jim Morrison..the list goes on...Anyways I think this might actually be better as an instrumental track...it sets a very good mood and gives the listener multiple images and allows the listener to create their own story...Some lead tracks would be needed to give it some more depth but this is really awesome..seriously I think this is the best piece I've heard from you...could be because you made it personal in the intro but I'm really feeling it...great work!

Hey Theo..Sorry to hear that!!
I think if your into reading you should try reading the alchemist(If you haven't),its quite inspirational..Basically it talks about how the universe will conspire against our dreams strengthening our commitment to our goals and faith into the process....But it will let you get where you want to go at the end...Just hang in there and keep expressing your musical voice to heal your frustration's...You'll be fine..Remember Dory in The Finding  nemo??Just keep swimming ,just keep swimming...Anyways great track..Love the detailing on some of the snare work,sounded almost like you added some ghost notes in them..Good song structure too!

This is a nice track. For a instrumental piece it's a bit to homogenous in my opinion. Therefor there should be some contrast. I think vocals can work great with this.  I'm curious to hear whether or not you going to make the vocals.

it shows the feelings gone into it!!

bluey

If at first you don't succeed try try try try try try again and again..... ditto several times!!!!!!!!!

Keep the goal in your mind and spirit alive.

Love the music, superb

Enter it in the battle!!!!

Denis