Improved this with m'lady one drunken night several several moons ago. thought about re-recording it but i dunno I kinda dig the shitty/drunk-factor of it. I feel as though if it was polished it would be tacky. turn it up tho. volumes kinda low. Let me know if you think a  more polished lo-fi recording would work.cause im on the fense.

theothercomrades did a fine job here,
besides that i think the piece has substance, especially the singing is quite psychedelic. good one.

I think for a professional track it's to littered, but i don't think that's what your aiming for. Your trying to write counterpointial voices, i'm intriged. I think you should keep the vertical harmonies in mind while doing so, but every try is great. So for the unigue voice-writing i will rate it high. I hope you will do (or have allready done) this more often.

There is a market for this raw stuff, I prefer some of my raw songs, the feel is real...............

Good luck.

Cheers

Denis