its just a rough track

Nice job on the recording and such.  Have u ever thought of adding vocals or drums?  If not you should try exploring those parts to music; you have a solid chord progression there.  Keep up the good work!

hey thanks, yeah I've thought of drums and I'm working on them now, i just wanted to get a rough version up first

for vocals I'm writing some lyrics then i gotta get a mic

I have since this post changed the guitars to flow smoother

once i can get those drums done I'll post another version

thanks though 

Yup its getting there,it sounds like you have the right ideas but its hard to tell without a melody where exactly your taking us..As far as the distorted guitars I think punchier chords (as in palm muted)would have a better result from what I can tell..Good show!

Excellent name for a song!

yeah..The title caught my eye..this does have poetential ..seems to get distored around 1:30...I guess it was intentional. when you get your mic and add drums...I'll have another listen..keep working on it...