#1June 15th, 2005 · 08:54 PM
3 threads / 3 songs
3 posts
Canada
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A song I wrote about a girl with my old band Abaddon ..... Abaddon split up but I am now in another project called Simplex, ask about it if you would like.

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#2June 15th, 2005 · 10:45 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
Nice job,like the flow.Well sung.Only thing is at 3:08 I was waiting for the guitar solo to kick in and it wasn't there.Keep up the good work.
#3June 16th, 2005 · 10:35 AM
124 threads / 30 songs
1,407 posts
United States of America
i really like the vocals.  there's a few parts where i think you could put more feeling behind the words when you sing it.  great job though!  this reminds me of a song my old band tried to write (it fell through b/c our drummer was impatient!) where after about 2/3 of the song went on like yours did, it kicked into prominent guitar distortion and higher vocals   i really like the idea here.  maybe you could turn the guitar on the last 1/3 of the song up?  not too much though---i'd hate to lose out on hearing the vocals clearly.  i like this one!
#4June 24th, 2005 · 06:44 PM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
Aww its really nice. What was the girls reaction to the song? I think most girls would melt if they had a song written about them even if it was crap (im not saying this is crap, i think its great) I wish someone wrote a song this pweddi about me    lol im kidding...
anywho, i agree with TonightsLastSong about the guitar being turned up
#5June 25th, 2005 · 01:50 AM
14 threads / 12 songs
177 posts
United States of America
Very good tune !! I love your voice man !! I going to check out some of your other stuff !!
#6June 28th, 2005 · 08:04 PM
8 threads / 3 songs
102 posts
United Kingdom
I won't repeat what everyone else has already said about the guitar level at the end (oops, just did) so i'll just say "I like it"
#7July 23rd, 2005 · 03:54 PM
2 threads / 2 songs
5 posts
United States of America
good
Not really my style, but I try to appreciate all music.  It is really good though
#8July 25th, 2005 · 12:33 PM
49 threads / 42 songs
493 posts
United Kingdom
At the risk of sounding like an echo im gonna say I thought the vocals were sweet in this track :P

Recording is also pretty good, and the song is chilled - I enjoyed listening to it. Good stuff
#9July 25th, 2005 · 08:37 PM
15 posts
United States of America
nice vocals
#10July 28th, 2005 · 04:47 AM
12 threads / 9 songs
142 posts
United States of America
There maybe something to say for not doing what we expect to hear on top 40 rock station.
Sounding like another band, might sell more records, but I don't think that busrting forth with a very strong guitar represents the "waiting" and the "giving up my life" aspects to the lyrics.
A super amped guitar way up in the mix would indicated more... agressive and asertive stances that I don't hear in the words....
#11July 28th, 2005 · 05:26 AM
11 threads / 2 songs
69 posts
United Kingdom
Good lyrics, good voice, good quality recording, brilliant song!
#12February 17th, 2006 · 08:08 PM
6 threads / 6 songs
52 posts
Canada
but what's the deal with Simplex?!?
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