Poppy... Poppy...

You are the sunshine in my life.
You are the light that shines.
You are so bright,
You shine of red light.
You are the sunshine in my life.

Oh...
Poppy... Poppy... Poppy...

I think you catched the right tension in this song. lyrics are not so impressive, however. jack

Oooooohhhh...... those harmonies are beautifull, you should try more like this Kine!!!!!!!!!!!!

Like it when you hit the high notes singing 'Poppy' around 2.19.

Great feel.

Denis

This one I do like a lot! 
Simplicity in the lyrics and main structure boost the feeling. I agree with Denis. After the two voices, that give a feeling of peace, the song resolves to a very strong and emotive definition at 2.19.
Rating it high and putting it in my MP4 player