I count the miles,
so far away but still so close.
We sit for hours
staring at the empty glass before us.

And now you're losing me.
And now we fade away.

I try to hide,
but my closet has no doors.
The pain inside
I can't take no more.

And now you're losing me.
And now we fade away to grey.

I cannot love you anymore.
How can I close this open door?
Leave...

Lost inside,
trapped in a world of illusion.
Please stop this fight,
it will only lead to pain and confusion.

And now you're losing me.
And now I fade away.

Hey this is a nice sweet tune.

Cool lyrics.

Not sure bout intro but gd effort overall

I like the lyrics too and the song is indeed sweet.
About the intro, I think it's part of the concept you set to it and it must be there. I would, nevertheless, suggest that it do not extend so much.
I found the first sounds to call my attention so that I could be ready to get the song from the first word. That is good. But then it took a little longer. That's what I felt. Anyway, this is a detail. The whole of a song is solid and clear as a concept and I do like it much!  Look, you've been in my favourites for a long time already! 

very particular voice jack