#1April 21st, 2008 · 01:04 PM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
Deja vu of You
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This song is not in a battle


Walking down this yellow mountain.
Seems like I've been here before.
I've got more than a thousand problems,
and I can't find a cure.

Walking down this yellow mountain.
Seems like I've been here before.
I've got more than a thousand problems,
and I can't find a cure.

My head is full of pieces of you, oh.
And as the water rises through your eyes
I fall.

Walking down this yellow mountain.
Seems like I've been here before.
I've got more than a thousand problems,
and I can't find a cure.

My head is full of pieces of you, oh.
And as the water rises through your eyes
I fall.
You know my head is full of pieces of you, oh.
And as the water rises through your eyes
I fall.

You don't need me,
and I don't need you,
and these eyes can see,
and these eyes have feelings,
and these ears don't wanna hear
your painful crying.
This heart can cry,
and these ears can bleed,
and this person can leave you.

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#2April 21st, 2008 · 04:24 PM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
Love the guitar riff in the verses...like the overall construction of the piece..the harmonies are a lovely touch..Before you come back in for the third verse I would have bass,drums build up and enter when the vox start.I think you should develop/re-arrange the outro a bit...something about it just doesn't click with me...maybe a long sustaining distorted guitar lead with lots of bends and legato's?Always enjoy listening to your stuff Kine...
#3April 23rd, 2008 · 03:23 AM
66 threads / 66 songs
153 posts
Italy
this piece
has a dark vibe which I enjoy a lot. simple and effective. jack
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