melodic trance, incomplete

Hey...

It sounds more like a "dance" track to me, although it doesn't really matter how you name it.

A few things that do matter to me:

The first part got a bit boring after a while, maybe use some kind of envelope on the lead synth?

The second part was much more "complete" using a wider range of sounds.

I think a fatter bass drum would bring the high synths up by contrast.

Some change in the melody line would be nice, too.

hi aethiris , thanks for pointing out those, i'll work on them,

Very nice beat, it got a bit long and it is a bit 'clinical' , not enough 'dirty corners' to all that MIDI. 

he he yeah , i have just begun still have a lot to learn how to make pro sounding tracks i hope i'll get better the more i make songs

Start automating the lead!
Although I like that stabs.

I had the thought of distorting the lead part and making it do minor instead of major (3 minute mark). But that's just me ;P.
Very chilled and relaxing this one :O

I'm liking the intro. Nice lead and beat.

The stop at 1:25 seems kind of sudden. I think it was unnecessary.

I'm liking the second part even more.

A problem I have with the electronic songs I've made is that I can't keep a thorough theme throughout. This is exactly what you've got going here. To me it seems like two different songs pasted together.

But anyway, I liked it. Good melody, good build up.

If you could perfect this and even out the rough ends, this would be a 90 or more, easily.

mm, agreed.

second part is great.  i liked the first part, but standing in contrast to the second part, the second beats it out. 

perhaps some sort of asynchronous background lead/harmony would make this more attention-grabbing?  just my random idea.  i'm hearing it as a double-time lead that is constantly stabbing it's melody through the lead you've already got.