The music is like the one of my other song.. but i took to the next level.. trying my level best to make a great sound track.. used various instruments.. and hope the composition and the arrangement is like by all! Do criticize..

thanks..

Very solid mix..not crazy about the the kinda synthetic oboe sound but other than that many good things happening here...Yea this is good....At 1 45 the cut in was a bit drastic and felt of centered from the context.The 239 was a bit better...Anyways good job!

Mix wise this is clear, and well balanced - it doesn't really float my boat though! 
There's not enough going on to keep me interested, and it doesn't stand out from other electronic compositions I've heard.

the mix stands up could go some lyrics vocal ambient texture tho.
Foundation for some thing here good work

The mix is decent... sounds like it could use more... don't really like that midi sounding instrument...



Yi Ban Ban

Have to agree with the midi like playing on this one...  Try using some portamento.. that is to say, let the notes glide from one to the next just a bit to make it sound more humanized.. another trick is to play with the velocities (or volume) of each note in the loop.. that way it sounds like the keys are being struck differently.. and less like its being played by a super accurate perfectly timed machine.  The mix is pretty crystal.. Your lows are just a tad muddy in places.. Love the breakdown at around 2:35... overall not bad.. Throw some lyrics over this one and fix the few minor issues and this works!