#1April 7th, 2008 · 01:49 PM
10 threads / 9 songs
35 posts
United States of America
Come on in, Lets get high
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Made using my Korg EMX-1, Electric Guitar, and a Head full of Pet Sounds. Enjoy : ).

Wallow  in your self pity
Alone in this windy city
Hollow heart clicking feet
At the corner of

bisecting streets
Looking for some one to meet

Internal heat has dissipated
This life is overrated
Cigarettes and coffee stains
Extinguished on you open

window pane
You wish you could change

Plowing snow in her nose
Slipping off her panty hose
Black silk to the velvet touch
Never knowing when

enough is enough
stop ignoring the future girl

their words are wind against her mast
heading to deposit cash
in the pockets of her dealers
life cant get any much realer

lets spend our last
moments getting high

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#2April 7th, 2008 · 10:32 PM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
well
This is really fricking happy isnt it?  Wow...  Makes me want to jump up and down and off a building...

        You need help man, you know that?  I am sitting here, crying into my coffee, and you sit there all smug in your little computer chair, smoking your cigarette and gettign high, and thinking your all that... well, let me tell you mister...  I'll have you know that, ummm  wait a minute...  umm... sorry, lost my head there, see what your song did? I hope your happy with yourself....  You go, have fun, don't worry about me, I'll just sit here alone, and cry and drink coffee.... no, it's really ok.. go... have fun..

               JimK
#3April 8th, 2008 · 03:46 AM
371 threads / 187 songs
3,398 posts
United Kingdom
Nice song, it just sounds too slow for my ears.

Cheers

Denis
#4April 8th, 2008 · 08:59 AM
31 threads / 19 songs
612 posts
Canada
This is awesome....ColdPlay meets Radiohead.I think you need to add a distorted lead guitar whining away with the  melody in some places...lots of legato slides and some bends...something like the solo in Smells Like Teen Spirit..I hope you get what I'm saying..I love the lyrics too..think maybe the vox could come up a DB or two.Nice job.
#5April 8th, 2008 · 09:31 PM
10 threads / 9 songs
35 posts
United States of America
I'm glad I got such an emotional reaction out of you Jim, that made my day : D. Thank you all for the positive feedback.
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