No idea what this is about
All the awesome guitar solo's are by my friend Seth
I made the chords and everything else

LYRICS

Hello said the yellow flower
who can say knowledge is power
counting down the hours
till I'm weak and frail howl and wail

why don't you put the blame on me
the cancer is growing inside me
a collection of thoughts and memories
I'm blind in my own mind
to the things in front of me

You and me lets go sailing girl
get away from what ties us down
existing naturally lacking fallacies
seeing the clouds flailing above

why don't you put the blame on me
the cancer is growing inside me
a collection of thoughts and memories
I'm blind in my own mind
to the things in front of me

Im liking the bass groove...nice recording on this take...I like the guitar arrangements!!The voice is great and so is the composition..You guys have some real nice hooks...The two things I think need working are the vocal tunning maybe some scales exercises could help....The other is that sort slapped in change to the chorus is sounds out place!!Nice solo work!

Great groove...vocals sound cool,very moody.Reminds me of a old sonic youth song with the vocals and the stuff in the background on the verses...guitar playing is cool.sounds like it needs some more feeling at times but its cool man,or maybe some kind of effect like a chorus or reverb to make it not sound so harsh and brittle at times....good and creative production though overall man

Agree with Marino's comments, plus the bass drum seems missplaced in some parts, intro is one part.

Overall I like your sound, it's got identity, man if you've got that, that's pretty cool!!!!!

Keep 'em coming!!!

Denis

Love the intro! Oh wow, the wah wah is great. The bass and guitar go well together, but I think the drums are a bit out of place.

Around the 2:20 mark or so, there seems to be too much going on and it gets kind of confusing. Also, when the solo at a little after 5:00, it just sounds like havoc. Turn down the guitar a bit.

This definitely has some potential. If you iron out the small kinks and equalize it a bit, it will be a kick ass song.

The vocals are fantastic. Reminds me of Smashing Pumpkins and Neutral Milk Hotel.

Dazednconfused, you just named some of my biggest influences : ).

Ok this is just plain weird.... which is exactly why I like it....  I like weird.....

      I am ALL ABOUT THE WEIRD...  Just check some of my older stuff.. hehe...


                I live the wah....   Not sure about the drum on the intro... don't sound too bad...  Vocals are sure, a bit out of tune, but not too bad....  but, yeah, that would be your weakness....  Muuhhaaa  I now know your weakness!! I shall exploit it to the fullest!! 


                       JimK