Kids on rail road tracks
Walking till they never come back
With all there belonging on their backs

Kicked out of their home
And not place to go
There living in a lawless state

No rules or regulations
To hesitate

There on there own
With nothing but there skin and there clothes
There on there own
With no intention of going home

Jenny plays guitar
Teddy’s hanging on
For the ride shes been promising her whole life

Rich dreams in a pool
The teens in rags are fools
But love is gonna keep them up

Like beams suspended on a bridge

There on there own
As they sleep under the high way ridge
There on there own
With no intention of going home

Solo

There on there own
Sleeping where there feet may roam
There on there own
With no intention of going home

I'm listening to this at work, the pc only has a built-in speaker, but it instantly has 'radio' appeal all over it!!!

The line 'Jenny plays guitar' is a great hook it, the vox and guitar sound sweet together.

I'll have a proper listen, but I have a feeling you've got a great tune here, will be interesting what other AMPers think.

Cheers

Denis

Edit: Ok I'm home now listening to this at home on some decent speakers, didn't realise this was live when I first heard it, actually it sounded better on my works PC throught it's tiny mono speaker, mad I know, but it's true, so get in the radio stations and see how it goes.

Thank you for your kind words! I need to learn how to record better. I noticed no one really pays attention to my song writing unless I record it well. Thank you for seeing past the shitty recording : D.

Yup I agree with Denis super radio friendly song!!!!The mix is a bit cluttered and and theres some vocal tunning and timing issues ...although those issues are present the song in it self is and easy hit!!!!!!!Many real good hooks in here!!!!

Great song ....really catchy...I agree very radio friendly...thats always a good thing I guess if your poor liek me!!

is it mono recorded?
I can hear some distortions on the drums etc..... but hey..... the Beatles had great fun and I am sure you had it also. And if I throw the Beatles in my post I just want to tell you that this music reminds me of the good old times and chords. anyway well done
the singer needs a bit work

all in all the song has a great expression to me

Get the singer to let go!!!  There's moments when the singer is holding back... worried about staying in tune?
A good catchy tune... Poppy fun!

Hai Ke Yi....

Thank you all for your kind words. I am the singer, drummer, bassist, guitarist, song writer etc... I need to re record this better... I had no idea it was radio friendly!!