Pagans___ Harmony/Backup Vocals
Reflex____Music/Guitar/Composition
Flyer_____Lyrics/Vocals

"Baby Don't Cry"

Verse 1
Moon shine's a
light
in the darkness
of night
for me
to
watch over you

chorus
oh. baby dont you cry
oh, my love dont cry
what lives one day dies
oh. baby please dont cry

Verse 2
there are no casualties
of men who fought
to be free
no homeless people
with out food to eat
no fatherless children
here
living in the streets

chorus
oh. baby don't you cry
oh, my love dont cry
we are born to die
oh. baby please

Instrumental

Ending
oh. baby Please don't cry
oh, my love dont cry
I was born to die
oh. baby please

No baby,dont cry


Lyrics By
Flyer
9:04 PM 11/24/2006

Nice collab.

Quite like the effects on the vox on this one, I'm sure I've heard you sing this one before..

It feels as though the song need to pick up in rhythm or it just may be the tempo needs to go up, I
can't put my finger on it??  I would still reduce the reverb on the music, so that it cuts through better.
As I said the vox are great, so it would be nice if you can mix amount the same as the music, hope that makes sence.

Keep 'em coming.

Denis

love love love the beach boy harmonies............
but its toooooo slowwwwwwwwwwww
this song could be 50% faster maybe

and stilll hold integrity
use those floaty harmonies .. i love em
dont post again till u finished...haha

constructive crit i hope

its just a bit dead in the water
give it a kick up the ass

big smiles

fish

I love the harmonies...i also love the spooky keyboard reminds me of Mr.Crowley or soemthing!!! The vocals are really high in the mix though

I thought the lyrics weren't that good, very clechie. I liked the music alot though, especially the vocal harmonies. It reminded me of the beach boys alot which is a very good thing. I do think a tambourine or something would enhance this, it would give more moment to the slow tempo.

Thanks everyone....

Yes Denis I have posted this before but I deleted ...


Flyer