#1April 3rd, 2008 · 08:36 AM
77 threads / 31 songs
353 posts
Norway
7
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This song is not in a battle


The sun rises at seven,
but I can't get my head out of bed.
Is it right to lie here all day?
Well, I guess I'll just.

Minus seven degrees.
I don't want to open the door.
It feels like spring will never come.
I guess I'll just.


Seven O'clock in the morning.
I don't want to get out of bed.
I just wanna listen to the birds singing.
Oh! I guess I'll just.

Bikers come a-rollin'.
I just want to follow the sun.
I don't want to go in.
It feels like summer's coming, oh.

The sun rises at seven.
I can't get my head out of bed.
Is it wrong to lie here all day?
Yeah, I guess I'll just.

Bikers come a-rollin'.
I just want to follow the sun.
I don't want to go in.
It feels like summer's coming, oh.

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#2April 3rd, 2008 · 01:32 PM
117 threads / 20 songs
1,422 posts
United States of America
this feels like it could be a "secret track" at the end of a cd--  It doesn't feel jumpy or bouncy or complex enough to be a headlining song, but on the flip side, it sounds excellent as one of those raw i'm-spacing-out-and-i-really-don't-mind songs, which kind of fits the theme of the lyric, doesn't it?
#3April 3rd, 2008 · 03:54 PM
14 threads / 13 songs
60 posts
United States of America
Dig it.
Really like this piece. How did you get that cool harmony? Is that some sort of effect?
#4April 4th, 2008 · 05:58 PM
176 threads / 26 songs
2,342 posts
United Kingdom
re: 7
lose the long guitar intro please 
your vocs are haunting!!!!!!!!!!
your voice is the centre!!!!!!!!!!!!
with fx very nice
your voice is best instrument .............on this trak ............ by miles!!!!!
guitar nice but too loud in the mix
you a great vocalist

loved the journey

kersploosh
fish
#5April 6th, 2008 · 12:21 AM
6 threads / 6 songs
70 posts
United States of America
I liek the guitar intro alot....?The vocals are great I like the haunting feel. The production is really cool.I think the vocals could come up alittle though but its cool...really spooky
#6April 6th, 2008 · 12:28 AM
10 threads / 9 songs
35 posts
United States of America
I like the low-fi quality of it. Is that chorus on the guitar, it sounds very spacey. I like it! your voice is nice, i like the part where you hit the major third the best.
#7May 16th, 2009 · 08:22 PM
15 threads / 15 songs
48 posts
Sweden
hi there ! thx for commenting on one of my songs thought I might stop by your site. I really, really, really like this one. absolutely one of ur best songs. your feeling is totally awesome, by that I mean your voice And your recording. it's cool when you reach the higher notes in "I can't get my head out of bed", sounds so.. i dunno.. i think cool is the word. but hey, seriously, the high notes when u're singing/(screaming). KEEP 'EM COMIN' , sounds great!

over n' out

// adAM
#8May 17th, 2009 · 05:23 AM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
Haven't heard this one before, but I really like all of your recent works. Would love to see you in action with full arrangements, even though your songs don't require that - and I do love the minimalism, really makes to vocal work come out really strong.

Well done!
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