This song represents how i feel rite now...the lyrics explains everything...still a simple song....i recorded it only with my guitar and my cheap mic...enjoy....and vote for me will ya...

I chilled song, you have a good voice. With some more polished and imaginative production it definitely has potential!

I agree with Dave, you need some studio time and maybe some band members.. .back up vocals maybe?

No offense , but the guitar was a little out of tune. Good emotional content.

good voice. i agree with the others, you need more instruments than it could be professional

nothin like a broken heart to show you what music is all about... by the way... what's the mathematical equation for a broken heart? lol... j/k Orlando...

the chorus is good... i would have personally just stuck with the words "Here I Am" over and over, but whatever... this is all about you.

need a better mic for sure... that's obvious... they are cheap... get one

uhhh... anyway, nice song, decent overall skills

oooh, here comes the "na na na" part... were you stoned? never understimate the power of a stoner to come up with nonsense lyrics... heheh... nice touch

Good composition and good preformance but slightly out of tune guitar and dodgey recording makes it hard to listen to in places. Saying that emphasis on the great composition and more congrats on your voice. Espialy if you were playing and singing at the same time. Something I havn't got the nack of yet.

the song is good, get a new mic, lol.

i dunno, the lyrics are somewhat generic.

a little work and it'll be nice still.

not a hit though.

really good song! the production does need to be better but I think also just the guitar and vocals hits home sometimes better.

Sad song. Good though. Like the guitar parts but you could do with bass drums etc. I know other people have said this but i just wanna say again the mic is cheap. Also the nananana bit is a good idea but maybe you should do it for a little less time. Liked the ending.

I really like this song man good job dude, lyrics are tight guitar sounds good nice voice good job.

hmmm ....

shows a lot of potential.  its a nice song, if a little (im trying not to sound patronising here) normal.  thats not a bad thing - its just that i listen to it thinking ive heard it before.

and PLEASE tune your guitar before you record.  this is the 2nd song of yours ive listened to and they've both been ruined by out of tune guitars.  its a lovely melody - its such a shame to detract from it by missing out something as basic as tuning your guitar before you start.

i know that my guitar is ut of tune...but at that time, i really don't care bout what the guitar sounds like or what my voice sounds like, coz it's really just for fun...
Coz, i've had a very  bad experience with love...   and the only way out is to make  song out from it...so...here i am...=)

Thanks fr your critics anyway...

i like how you mixed, simple like that, voice + guitar

it sounded soooooo like the usual type of songs... im not really used to listening to this kind of songs but i gotta say ur not that bad.... but wats with the "na na na" part???? i didnt like it... but thats just me..  but dude u got great vocals!! which is always good.. so i guess its not that bad..