Here is a little piece I am kicking around right now...  This is just a taste of it...  Not real sure where to go with this....  This is about all I have...  I kind of hit a rut with it... perhaps someone can come up with some ideas?  Would love to hear it... maybe a collab of sorts??

          Anyway, listen and let me know.... thanks..

                             JimK

hmmm,..... I think I have heard this before......I am sure I have,.... I think it might need
to be longer and more words in it.......yea that's it! 


-NT4M

i liked it right there at the end as you played a little harder on the strings--- i felt like it could make a slight key change and play higher in order to move into another section..... not really sure where you'd go with it, but hey.. usually when I hit that sort of spot in my songs (just 'bout all of them) I take a break for a few days, and then some little melody or riff will come to my head and I can try to mold into something useable   maybe some new melody will suddenly grace your imagination soon, one that you can append to the end of this!

BLAHST.  that's the second time someone's posted at the very same minute as myself, stealing away the first comment 


   haha, not really.  ... i'm off to bed, have a great night, everyone where it's nighttime right now!

Ok, after this bit, a blues drum beat and bass line, start singing at the top of your range.
Or you could have an ambient sort of feel to give the impression your walking in outer space totaly lost,
Hmm that's it for now.

Denis

the theme is ok. try with some filter for voice and simple rhythm machine and maybe real bass guitar. anyway, quite good start. after few takes you'll know what to do.

all the best!

KING NOODLE...........
yOUr mAjESTY .........
Its a noodle............
next step ........ give it legs ..... to keep on walkin.haHa



sIR notalot

That is a great beginning, it needs to go somewhere unexpected I think. Keep pushing forward. I have so many bit of songs like yours, maybe we could put them together!