2 in loops and then two for one guitar test take lok=l

nice experimental test...Good ideas in random feel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm liking this keep at it!!!

I was really just trying to see if I could make a human sounding drum beat... but the original kick and snare aren' drum sounds so I made them alternating decending triads, and then actually found a set of real sound drums that I liked... but it sounded thin so I added the two vocal sounds, and then a third but you can't tell its  a vocal becauseI did the decending triad pattern with it, lol

I just added the guitar because it was the same 5-10 seconds looped for 3 minutes lol

maybe the drums are a bit overruling to everything else.,
i like that little high voice(?)  a lot, also the 'chorus' sound is nice.., when gtr comes in is good,
but to me the soloing part is really out of place (in this way)
i think this could go very well into a more song like piece
nice experiment indeed

Interesting rhythm you got going, I sort of feel an indian tribal thingy.

Yeah something to work on for sure.

Denis

a bit of a tub thumper rhythm to land on..........
do i hear some guitar improvisation ............... yes thats sweet
look at the balance between wot u play and the fl track
it will come with practise

perhaps your guitar sounds to the front when u mix???


enjoy experimenting

fish

yeah, i'd definitely put the guitar a little more up front.

I really like the guitar at 1:30. somehow the bending notes strike some nostalgic memory... same at 2:30.  If I had to pick a single spot where the guitar matches the feel of the track, it'd be at that 1:30 mark.  I love it.

props to you for accomplishing something in FL.  I still suck at FL beyond reason.  I'm interested in experiementing, but my experiements never feel useable :P

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The drums too much all the way through. It breaks at 1:50 (and before) to only the drum and the Aaa and it sounds cool.
I would have liked to have heard more of the guitar loop, it sounded simply sweet and soft.....just the drum thumps all over it.

he mate. good use of fl!

check my stuff. almost everything is worked in fl studio.

If you mean breaks in guitar I understand you.. but if you mean breaks in the loop.. the guitar after the first break is the same 8 bars looped strike for strike.

The guitar isn't generated fl studio, its recorded live over the mic with the beats... I guess next tiem I fl studio I'll turn down my volume on the speakers.



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Its funny one person didn't like the lead style guitar work when I did it, another person did. NEATO

haha.. that's why i can never *really* be mad when somebody says my song is crap, because what one person says or thinks can be a world apart from when the rest of people think.  You just have to find the right crowd   that's the key to having people like you :P

My son,

      I am very disappointed in you.... I thought you said you stopped taking dope..  It's rotting your brain...

     heheheheheehhehehehehehehehehe  

  Seriously though, very cool exspearamint, as Marino stated... BTW, I love spearmint.. It's my fav... (Don't you hate that? fav. bleh..  what the ****)  oh, wait, where was I? umm..  yeah, back to this crap, err, I mean this umm. dang where was I?  Oh yeah, this song is excellent... I love the horns.. what? there isn't any horns?  hold on, let me listen again.... 

                                       (Listening)..


 Ok...  He this is a great expearmint, like Marino said.. BTW, I love spearmint.. It's my-- what? I already said that... oh.. ok...  well, I guess that's all I have to say then...  L8rs..(Don't you hate that? L8rs. bleh.. what the he**)...

P.S. Kids, don't do drugs...

lol jim I think you need to read the guilde to writing critiques again...